maybe itll turn out better or ... prob worse ill put both versions so you can see how much i suck lol ok

first version:

i walked across the world to kiss your hand
but you trampled my heart into the ground
you left me with nothing but pain and tears
i am broken hearted and alone
all that i had was you and now your gone

new version:

i walked across the world to kiss his hand
but he trampled my heart into the ground
he left me with nothing but pain and tears
i was broken hearted and alone
all that i had was him and now hes gone
but through my pain there was you to save me
to help remind me what it was like
to be happy and to be loved again
i am so glad i have you here with me
here to help me brighten my life
a life that had become so dark i couldnt see
see things for what they were but now...
your here and now im finally spellbound


lol can you tell when like i gave up lol i really cant even concentrate on something i wanan do lol o well im not worried about it lol